Learner response to Ignite – typed up as requested.
Excellent reflection and thoughtful paragraph on continuing this into critical
investigation.
Critical Investigation proposal – done, really detailed and
looks impressive. The excellent research over the summer has really paid off
here.
The question needs a slight change – we can’t make new
technology part of the question due to it being the exam topic. I would
recommend moving the question on to representation and music videos – you can
still have a paragraph on new technology and feminism but don’t make it the
question.
Angle/hypothesis – absolutely superb. These are the key
media issues and debates concerning the text so it’s brilliant to see you’ve
cut straight through to them.
Linked production – needs some thought, all the options
could work but think about what is do-able. A parody could work but they are
incredibly difficult. Give it some thought over the next half-term.
Loads of MIGRAIN research – your summer project really has
helped here, brilliant to see.
For SHEP – social is good but historical and political need
some work. For historical, look at music videos from 20/30 years ago – Madonna
for example? For political I agree looking at the lack of action on feminist
issues (where relevant) sounds like a good way to go. But obviously need to
plan it/put it in research plan.
For issues/debates/theories, pretty good but you need to
link them to your topic.
For the research plan, you’ve got a good start but will need
much more detail over the next few weeks. Copy it into your Notes and Quotes
document but before doing any research do some more on the research plan.
Publish this on your blog with your next steps in this project.
- continue with the notes and quotes ensuring i have rich an relevant quotation
- tweek up the wording of the question
- work on the social and political part of SHEP
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